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My body is wrong.
Every crease, every curve
Is a contradiction,
Like a figure eight
Seen in a warped mirror.
I am like the Venus de Milo
But with arms.
My torso is a tear,
A rounded bottom
With a pointed tip.
But you say that you
Are no Vitruvian Man
And besides,
Pears have always been
Your favourite fruit.
©2008-2009 ~MistakenMagic
:iconmistakenmagic:

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A message to all women with curves!

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:iconerikarae:
perfect.

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"y antes de morirme quiero
echar mis versos del alma." -José Martí
:iconlaurmaia:
No better word to describe it.

This is phenomenal!

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It's enough for this restless warrior just to be with you :heart:
:iconkivenchy:
you're right.
no better way to describe this.
this is so good.
:iconxsweetxblasphemyx:
i really like this, the self doubt at the beginning is so familiar but you quash it so perfectly and poetically
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--
I am just a good
for nothing - companion
of moon and flower

- Bill Wyatt
:iconwhatsinanamexx:
That's really interesting...
It starts off as self doubt and ends with self satisfaction. Love it. :+favlove:

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Guys are jealous of girls. They just want boobs.

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